Comments on: The Spark by Rakhi Jayashankar – #Storytellersbloghop https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/ A Pitstop for Books Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.7 By: Anonymous https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-165 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-165 Never saw a twin tale coming in the shades of love! What a twist of romance from day to night and the character of the two brothers, like yin and yang. Very well- written indeed! – sonali

]]> By: Amritha Srinath(themummastartup) https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-166 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-166 Wow, what a nail-biting end to the story! I absolutely loved this take to 'shades of love'. Initially when I started reading, I thought this going to be a sweet tale on love, memories, etc. But as I kept reading, the plot began showing a dark side and it kept me hooked till the end. Sometimes the danger lurks in the corner with the one we love and the who loves us. This story is a witness to that. I absolutely loved your writing style Rakhi, kept me hooked!

]]> By: Pooja Jha https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-167 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-167 Very nice, It was thrilling, I loved this shade of love too, It is Desperate shade of love, being desperate and can do anything, to get one's love, by hook or by crook. I like thrilling stories too… so, completely my kind of story read. I just had a my kind a story read loved it..

]]> By: Anushka B https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-168 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-168 What a thrilling tale and shade of love! love your narration style and the language you have used. well written story with gripping power!

]]> By: Dishki https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-171 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-171 I like reading thrillers and the story had me hooked till the end. A very different take on the love!

]]> By: Prisha Lalwani https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-172 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-172 I liked the story, the end makes it worth the whole read.

But i would have preferred a simpled down version- or a more elaborate one. The style of writing resembles more of a Novel telling. So when we say strict words like facial hair… It either needs more build up or simplified use of hair on the face. I'm sorry for this detail, i truly love the story and would enjoy it more.

]]> By: MeenalSonal https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-173 Sun, 26 Mar 2023 02:40:34 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-173 A gripping story that kept me hooked till the climax. Perfect expressions and strong characterization in a short story are hard to achieve, but your story has it all.

]]> By: Pebble In The Still Waters https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-189 Fri, 10 Mar 2023 12:00:09 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-189 What a thrilling tale of mistaken identity, love, and danger. The plot twists kept me engaged and curious about what will happen next. Overall, it's a great example of how a short story can pack a punch.

]]> By: Aditi Kapur https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-191 Fri, 10 Mar 2023 12:00:09 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-191 What a surprise twist in the end! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story with astonishing revelation in the end.
"I saw Rex as two" is chilling!

]]> By: Eraofillumination https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-192 Fri, 10 Mar 2023 12:00:09 +0000 https://outsetbooks.com/2023/02/14/the-spark-by-rakhi-jayashankar-storytellersbloghop/#comment-192 Didn't expect the turn of event…but truly grasping

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